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Very moving verses

#1 Post by Doug »

@Char thank you for posting those verses.
There's so many deep feelings in your words.
Don't ever get rid of them.

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#2 Post by Sparkle »

@Char Why would anyone want to ignore such beautiful verses? Thank you so much.
With this hand, I will lift your sorrows. Your cup will never be empty, for I will be your wine. With this candle, I will light your way into darkness. With this ring, I ask you to be mine.........The Corpse Bride

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#3 Post by Blaze »

@Char You have an amazing gift with words - don't waste such talent and we certainly won't ignore it. Keep 'em coming :D

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#4 Post by Niftyons »

Found out!

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#5 Post by Oldblueraincoat »

Enjoyed them all but particularly 'parsnips', that one is so full of raw emotion that if it was a song Taylor Swift would do it Justice.

P.S. Is @Niftyons @nifty :D

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#6 Post by Niftyons »

Otherwise known as Banana Fingers. I tried to revert to old Monica but couldn’t do it.

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#7 Post by Oldblueraincoat »

Niftyons wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 8:07 amFound out!
What are you on about - Did you like the poems or not - how about something constructive about the work or is that too difficult?

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#8 Post by Char »

Thanks to all of you for your kind comments. :oops:

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#9 Post by Sparkle »

@Char no no, thank you for giving us the opportunity to be able to send you kind comments.
With this hand, I will lift your sorrows. Your cup will never be empty, for I will be your wine. With this candle, I will light your way into darkness. With this ring, I ask you to be mine.........The Corpse Bride

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#10 Post by Char »

Oldblueraincoat wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 10:01 am Enjoyed them all but particularly 'parsnips', that one is so full of raw emotion that if it was a song Taylor Swift would do it Justice.

P.S. Is @Niftyons @nifty :D
Thanks,OBR, that one scares me a bit, I didn't know I was capable of such hatred until that flowed out from me.

Nifty had problems with he other user account so he's using another one instead at the moment.

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