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#1 Post by Spardo »

In 2004, inspired by Lira and Match, sleeping in front of the fire.

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The two dogs scampered eagerly into the woods. Beyond the wood they emerged into the
sunlight. The spaniel picked up a scent, rabbit or hare, and the greyhound watched with a wary eye. They were a team. Finder and chaser. Swift race; kill.

Legs stopped twitching.
Eyes opened to the heat of the fire.
Time to eat.
Dogs dream too.

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Stinky
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#2 Post by Stinky »

Like that.
Few words.
But you painted an easily seen picture.

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#3 Post by Spardo »

Thank you, I have short, and I have long, I like them equally. But short makes a pithy point. :)

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#4 Post by Char »

t'is lovely David - they must be hunting mustn't they. I really miss watching mine sleep they always made me smile.
Thanks for the memories you've awakened.

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